A Morning Haiku

All these senryus going around, I thought I'd get in on the fun. Saw this sight and was inspired, somewhere in Ohio on Route 30 near the Indiana border.

Gray- white mists hover

Sun tries in vain to touch Earth

Clouds got to her first.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This Haiku is most amusing.

[KAOlmsted]

This is astounding. Seriously well done, Mark.

[Mark]

Thank you so much. Glad you like

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure!

[s y e]

Ha, looks like I am the only one who needs to write one now! xD Kidding, I'm leaving that to all you people, hahaha.

Awesome job! I loved how you worded it, really great job, Mark!

[Mark]

Thank you dear Noodle. Write whatever you wish, and i will read it!

[Pryde Foltz]

This poem shows, you don't need thirty stanzas to have a meaningful write. In my mind, I just concocted a entire short story from your three lines.

[Mark]

Thanks I love to inspire!

[SyberRose]

Nicely penned Mark...I can vision the image you saw on your trip...Rose:)

[Devanshu Rajput]

I love to read and write haikus. You here incredibly had formed an image of panoramic nature that we see in morning.

[Renée]

Well Done!. Great Haiku !

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfection is ever i read it!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the strength of a cloud.
Coyote