Remembered

The naked branches of winter

bones showing; swaying as they catch the snow.

have watched, waited...

contemplated

the voice remembered, the warm breath;

of Spring.

Reviews

[Claire Twinn]

I love your vision Mark, the branch bones against the stark white snow create a vivid picture of winter.

[Mark]

Thanks Claire! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[KAOlmsted]

I'm glad I saw you today...it reminded me I haven't visited you in quite some time...shame on me. I'm thrilled I chose this one, rather randomly I confess *laugh* because it's positively stunning. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

[Mark]

Thank you dear one! I'm glad to have seen you today as well. :)

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This is very good, I love the natures poem, capture the picturesque splendor with elegant and style. Thanks Mr. Mark for sharing this remarkable piece.

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I think you could cut the ellipsis in the third line - might help the flow a little. Good use of imagery. The second line is the best one. Good work.

[Mark]

Thanks for your thoughts. :)

[AYVID N]

Such a bare, empowerished picture of winter created here....

"bones showing; swaying as they catch the snow" - All nature waiting for redemption from the freezing captivity.

This was exquisite poetry with a great feel to it.

[Mark]

thank you so much!