Night Long

tame erotic blues

Long, down to the floor

long, knockin' down my door

movin, swayin' rounded hips

long and dancin' legs to lips

Falling so long on top of me

baby, you are my cup of tea

long legs swingin'

tonight I'm wingin'

come in here girl

stop right there

long legs unfurl

oh you're gonna share

long night dancin'

in my arms

fallin, prancin'

dusk til dawn

Baby, let me get me

out of your way

 long lovin', she

lets my magic play.

Long hair, long legs

raven night has come

teasin', see who begs

cursin' when we see the dawn.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey mark you still clubbing or is it all fantasy? Lol, you describe this in such an erotic way without the erotic detail and it feels late! Well done!

[Mark]

naw, all fantasy. :) Thanks John.

[Claire Twinn]

Sounds like a wild night with a foxy lady! Lovin' the feeling Mark.

[Mark]

Thank you Claire ;)

[Andrew N. Farrens]

really good...I especially enjoy the last line:
"cursin' when we see the dawn."
I have felt that way many a time.......
ANF

[Mark]

thanks buddy, was trying to make that feel like they were sad to see their night end... but am not sure I succeeded.