Insidious

a little Autumn darkness

Screaming so softly 

in the night.

Moon hiding craftily,

from our sight.

Our will to pay

demons obeyed

wrong is the new right.

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

sounds like two people giving into the forbidden with total abandon.

[Mark]

thanks MB

[Andrew N. Farrens]

A damned fine poem whose title attracted me because it is quite simple one of my favorite words.......
Keep that pen to paper or finger to key-board or however the hell you write these jewels of abstract poetry. SELAH!
Res Ipsa Loquitur
ANF

100/100

[Mark]

Thanks brother :)

[de_maruf]

liked it

[Pratik]

So many shades in this little treasure.. I see a creepy, dark piece with lots of mystic elements... it takes quite a gumption to brew up something like this.. I quite enjoyed this Mark :)

[Mark]

Thanks a bunch Aaran :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Mark a very short piece stuffed with sound and and atmosphere that brings a shiver to my spine!!!!!

[Stanley Wilson]

Very halloween really atmospheric write

[mandy]

just right for halloween,,,eerie!...or fright night. demons obeyed,,,wrong is the new right. scary! you set a sinister mood, mark..well done.

[Mark]

Thanks Darlin' :)