Insidious

Insidious

A Poem by Mark
"

a little Autumn darkness

"
Screaming so softly 
in the night.
Moon hiding craftily,
from our sight.
Our will to pay
demons obeyed
wrong is the new right.

© 2012 Mark


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And you craftily order this poem. You are a bard!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Barbara Walker

8 Years Ago

I typed "worded", but as you can see Google thinks it knows all!
Mark

8 Years Ago

LOL darn smart phones!!! Thanks for reading.
A amazing use of words. Create a dark vision with good description. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow it's amazing how you told an entire story in such a powerful way in just a few short lines. The last line really hits you. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


sometimes the shortest poems get it across better!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow, I really like this short poem especially the words "wrong is the new right". Quite the dark ending. Great work!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wrong is the new right- dark poem, love it. Much darkness in a few lines!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmm, a very interesting poem! I find the single short stanza form often brings out great ideas, and this is no different! I am left at the end having enjoyed the poem, though always slightly hungry for more, which in my opinion is exactly how you want to leave your readers!

Well done Mark, a good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i really like short poetic piece of thoughts. A step to the dark side!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Mark

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