Insidious
A Poem by
Mark
a little Autumn darkness
Screaming so softly
in the night.
Moon hiding craftily,
from our sight.
Our will to pay
demons obeyed
wrong is the new right.
© 2012 Mark
Reviews
And you craftily order this poem. You are a bard!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I typed "worded", but as you can see Google thinks it knows all!
8 Years Ago
LOL darn smart phones!!! Thanks for reading.
A amazing use of words. Create a dark vision with good description. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
A amazing use of words. Create a dark vision with good description. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Wow it's amazing how you told an entire story in such a powerful way in just a few short lines. The last line really hits you. Great job!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow it's amazing how you told an entire story in such a powerful way in just a few short lines. The last line really hits you. Great job!
sometimes the shortest poems get it across better!
Posted 11 Years Ago
sometimes the shortest poems get it across better!
Wow, I really like this short poem especially the words "wrong is the new right". Quite the dark ending. Great work!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Wow, I really like this short poem especially the words "wrong is the new right". Quite the dark ending. Great work!!
Wrong is the new right- dark poem, love it. Much darkness in a few lines!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Wrong is the new right- dark poem, love it. Much darkness in a few lines!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hmm, a very interesting poem! I find the single short stanza form often brings out great ideas, and this is no different! I am left at the end having enjoyed the poem, though always slightly hungry for more, which in my opinion is exactly how you want to leave your readers!
Well done Mark, a good poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Hmm, a very interesting poem! I find the single short stanza form often brings out great ideas, and this is no different! I am left at the end having enjoyed the poem, though always slightly hungry for more, which in my opinion is exactly how you want to leave your readers!
Well done Mark, a good poem.
i really like short poetic piece of thoughts. A step to the dark side!
Posted 12 Years Ago
i really like short poetic piece of thoughts. A step to the dark side!
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Added on October 12, 2012
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Mark Dallas, TX
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I"m a gypsy born in New Hampshire, raised in Alaska, schooled in Washington, raised a family in California. Recently settled in Concord NH area. Where to next? I don't really have to think about it, i..
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