Insidious

a little Autumn darkness

Screaming so softly 

in the night.

Moon hiding craftily,

from our sight.

Our will to pay

demons obeyed

wrong is the new right.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

And you craftily order this poem. You are a bard!

[Barbara Walker]

I typed "worded", but as you can see Google thinks it knows all!

[Mark]

LOL darn smart phones!!! Thanks for reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing use of words. Create a dark vision with good description. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Blue Ivory]

Wow it's amazing how you told an entire story in such a powerful way in just a few short lines. The last line really hits you. Great job!

[spiritwind]

sometimes the shortest poems get it across better!

[Sid]

Wow, I really like this short poem especially the words "wrong is the new right". Quite the dark ending. Great work!!

[Mary]

Wrong is the new right- dark poem, love it. Much darkness in a few lines!

[chartinboy]

Hmm, a very interesting poem! I find the single short stanza form often brings out great ideas, and this is no different! I am left at the end having enjoyed the poem, though always slightly hungry for more, which in my opinion is exactly how you want to leave your readers!

Well done Mark, a good poem.

[captain]

i really like short poetic piece of thoughts. A step to the dark side!