hard to go back home, what was is not the same today, but live and do, do and live, give open spread your heart wide strong maybe the beat will bring a drummer to remind her of your hand alive and warm ready to stop and stand together, Partners in life.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Lee, that dream is done and gone dusty but it is still remembered. :)
Strength in its sweet gentleness. Allows the reader to tag along with its unfolding tale. The invite to take the hand is more than just mere charm but intricately a part of the poem's drawing capacity. Well done and thanks for sharing.
Beautiful photo and words. I like the story and the positive ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
Love is eternal, and it grows, just like trees in nature,
When you're good with it.
Balance it, give water, and sun the same time
Such a yearning beauty, here, romance, and
Need on top! I enjoyed your words dear poet,
Lovely work,
E.L.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you dear, (I won't call you girl) :)
12 Years Ago
LOL, haha I saw it as a pretty compliment too, don't worry, I'm still young whohooo :P
hard to go back home, what was is not the same today, but live and do, do and live, give open spread your heart wide strong maybe the beat will bring a drummer to remind her of your hand alive and warm ready to stop and stand together, Partners in life.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thank you Lee, that dream is done and gone dusty but it is still remembered. :)
Awww...its soo sweet and touching...reminiscing about past sometimes gives happiness many a time pain...sometimes you atually wonder where you have gone wrong..very well written...evn i had done a poem on questions that were forever unanswered..:)
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