A couple

Something I wrote in 2010 about someone special that will always be special.

Was it me, was it you?

Did the days get away,

or did we simply get lost,

lost in our play?

I would give, I would bleed

I would carve in a seed

what our love would do

and plant it; a tree for you.

I remember what I was

what I listened to

Where I went and 

the words I spoke to you...

Think of the tree 

we would have now;

tall, strong, beautiful green

but I got us lost, and I grieve.

but whatever road I have left,

Whatever stars still shine on my path,

come with me, walk and hold my hand.

we will make the days we have left, grand.

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

hard to go back home, what was is not the same today, but live and do, do and live, give open spread your heart wide strong maybe the beat will bring a drummer to remind her of your hand alive and warm ready to stop and stand together, Partners in life.

[Mark]

Thank you Lee, that dream is done and gone dusty but it is still remembered. :)

[Red Brick Keshner]

Strength in its sweet gentleness. Allows the reader to tag along with its unfolding tale. The invite to take the hand is more than just mere charm but intricately a part of the poem's drawing capacity. Well done and thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and words. I like the story and the positive ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mark]

Love is eternal, and it grows, just like trees in nature,
When you're good with it.
Balance it, give water, and sun the same time
Such a yearning beauty, here, romance, and
Need on top! I enjoyed your words dear poet,

Lovely work,

E.L.

[Mark]

Thank you dear, (I won't call you girl) :)

LOL, haha I saw it as a pretty compliment too, don't worry, I'm still young whohooo :P

[Tate Morgan]

That is really deep and well thought out.I often think I should plant a tree for my memories

[Claire Twinn]

So sad and hopeful too, but I wonder if we refind love will it be as true?

[Ruth]

There is always hope - even at the turning :) Lovely xoxo

[Cerise]

Awww...its soo sweet and touching...reminiscing about past sometimes gives happiness many a time pain...sometimes you atually wonder where you have gone wrong..very well written...evn i had done a poem on questions that were forever unanswered..:)

[Mark]

Thank you Fancy :)

[Cherrie]

reflecting is never an easy thing, great poem full of emotion