Where I stand

Where I stand

A Poem by Mark
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In the end we create who we are or allow others to do it for is.

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I stand here ever after,
on this ground I chose.
The tears and the laughter,
I have built from those

 who came into my life,
Either kept or cast away.
Some brought joy, some brought strife.
But I decided, come what may.

This foundation is 
my own creation.
This, my revelation
is where I stand.

I have built the 
house I live in
from those I chose 
and who were given.

I have built right here 
on this hallowed ground.
from what I've gathered
and from what I've found.

I don't hold to tomorrow
but I have shapes from the past.
the smiles, the wiles, and the sorrow
all of them form the role I cast.

I can choose
what to keep.
I can lose
or I can reap.

This foundation is
my own creation.
This my revelation
is where I stand.

© 2012 Mark


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Mia
Knowing that everything, from your foundation to what you chose to build upon it, was from your choice and your choice alone is a remarkable thing. What I appreciated the most about this poem is that you acknowledge both the good and bad; owned both the good and the bad. This is a lovely poem Mark :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mark

12 Years Ago

I am who I am and we are who we are, now let's go play :)
Mia

12 Years Ago

:D
Wow what a strong piece, both the words and the poem as a whole. Really well done, I love the message sent through each line. Outstanding.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mark

12 Years Ago

Thanks Avy, glad you liked it :)

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