One in Desire

Inspired by a another great writer.

Slowly, your defenses fall,

making soft sounds

like lace dropping to the floor.

Every breath brings desire;

Each movement, hunger;

Each step, I am closer.

The last of the satin

is flung to the floor somewhere

my mouth fills with a soft piece of you.

Your body I possess

in these fleeting moments

that go on into forever.

You are mine. I penetrate

and two people are changed

to one beast of desire.

Reviews

[Stanley Wilson]

good flow and sensual work

[Mark]

Thank you Stanley :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Mark a very gentle and sensual write that ends with a passionate raising of desire. Good and flowing. The first stanza is lovely.

[lee von cleef]

Strike like,and re read it. sounds
lace dropping to the floor.
I don't know if you need "somewhere"
Lust and desire are here

Superb, it seems an elusive stop, right in the here and now, in the eye of the force.... I really enjoyed this piece.

E.L.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Your body I possess

in these fleeting moments

that go on into forever.



You are mine. I penetrate

and two people are changed

to one beast of desire."~ This is Heat!...starts soft and romantic, then ends with "one beast of desire"... magnetic!

Romance and passion entwined...NICE!

[Mark]

Thank you Robbie. I always enjoy reading your work because it gives me the feeling of a woman's perspective of desire and I was inspired to try and write a man's experience.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's always a pleasure to read your work... I love reading on the man's perpective as well. Thank you for writing it. :)