One in Desire

Inspired by a another great writer.

Slowly, your defenses fall,

making soft sounds

like lace dropping to the floor.

Every breath brings desire;

Each movement, hunger;

Each step, I am closer.

The last of the satin

is flung to the floor somewhere

my mouth fills with a soft piece of you.

Your body I possess

in these fleeting moments

that go on into forever.

You are mine. I penetrate

and two people are changed

to one beast of desire.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The beast of desire is mighty strong. I like the flow of the poem leading the reader to a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem my Poet friend.
Coyote

[The Random Writings Of ..]

I must say, this piece is very beautifully written. A desire that slowly rises throughout the piece, and the images, wow so vivid in my mind.
"The last of the satin
is flung to the floor somewhere
my mouth fills with a soft piece of you"
I absolutely love this stanza - the satin, falling or flung to the floor, this to me is so sensual. Finishing with "my mouth fills with a soft piece of you" - So beautiful!
This is penned very eloquently and with such deep passion. I can only imagine the thought behind writing this. The last stanza wraps up the piece to a wonderful degree. Especially the last line "to one beast of desire" I love this description. because often we or I can describe love making as a beast, though not in a bad way. It is so overwhelming.
Great, Amazing piece!
Kate

[Mark]

Thanks Sweetheart, glad you enjoyed it. xoxo

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

I did very much!

[Penlady]

....delicious images...

[Mark]

Thank you dear :)

[Penlady]

My mind went quickly to the freeing of inhibitians like silk floating to the floor when two lovers are in perfect sync and the world is the perfect place...thanks for a lovely moment...

[Mark]

you are very welcome dear lady. xoxo

[Mary]

sensual, love the images "the last of the satin is flung to the floor somewhere..." "one beast of desire" wonderful sensual write.

[mandy]

very sensual, but not crude....very nice

[Geraldine]

Gentlemanly written!! :D That is sweet, sweet and sweet and the last line "to one beast of desire." -- > that's really a great line.

[Mark]

Thank you hon :)

[Geraldine]

aww, you're welcome!.

[Bewitching Sensations]

i agree a soft approach .. nice poem

[Claire Twinn]

This beautiful poem has a lovely contrast of feelings, both soft and urgently passionate.

[Mark]

Thanks :)

[Blue Ivory]

This is a really nice way to describe the act of making love. It is beautiful, not erotic or cheap as you do not put in any ugly details. I normally am clueless of how to write like that!

[Mark]

you write very well in your own style. ;)