Two Souls Touched

Why are relationships so damn complicated?

You touched my soul with yours,

Opened your heart,

Letting your secrets pour over me

Like cold rain surprise.

You touched my laughter and laughed

In our Spring of Discovery

Both of us excited and humgry.

The surprise warm, fulfilling.

I pushed you too much

The wall was too hard

So you drew away

My fault, my surprising pain.

Have I wished, have I prayed

That Spring will renew our laughter

That souls once touched will remember.

That our surprise will return again.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

you express your feelings perfectly, we all make mistakes but it does not mean that things cannot be put right......A great write

[SHEEMA HUQ]

touching expressions, easily construed, a good poem, thanks.

[Phoenix]

Very nice!

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A beautiful tale of two souls, and unrequited love. I can relate. Thank you for a lovely read.

[T. Michele Smock]

i like it

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Writing about the souls of one another can be so hard. Especially if the loss was profound. The emotions of this come through from your heart, and it both loving and sad. I am sorry for the heartache, this can be the most difficult. You describe it with such clarity, I feel the pain you speak of, and the love you talk about first is so tender and pure, it is clear though your words the love you have felt. Incredible write!

[Mark]

Thanks Kate. Your thoughts are much appreciated and I'm glad you liked the piece. :)

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

You are most welcome!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

with new love the road is sometimes rocky and sometimes one trips over one of them. It doesn't always mean that things are over.......so maybe there isn't a wall, just a lesson to be learned. Very good poem Mark.

[Mark]

Thanks for your thoughts Neva :) The relationship this was written about, I have never had closure on. I'm not sure I portrayed that as well as I'd have liked. It's tough to move on from someone you care so much for when there is no definitive end and hope continues.

[Larry Dyson]

Mark,I find that a door not closed...is still open in a manner...Laury

[Mark]

Thanks Laury

[Mockingbird]

they shared a unique bond, but sometimes someone makes a mistake. very nostalgic.

[Mark]

thanks Mbird, glad it sparked something in you. ;)

[Stanley Wilson]

great rythm and flow sad in places i suppose we have all had our hearts stomped on
great poem

[Mark]

thanks for your thoughts Stanley :)