The inner self, the depths of someone, and the core that drives us to live, I tried to channel it and find the spark that gives me hope and strength to continue living with positive energy.
It reads beautifully and smooth the cadence is wonderful. Couldn't we all use a little hope? After several reads, I keep coming back to the line "let the River of Peace flow at a constant rate". Not the river of Joy or Justice, I'd rather find myself in the river of peace. Thank you for these words.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Thank you for gracing me with your kind words, I am really honored that you come to this piece again.. read moreThank you for gracing me with your kind words, I am really honored that you come to this piece again and again.
Positive and uplifting read MH.....like this line :
Connect my soul to its magical hidden roots
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
I am really happy that you found my poem positive and uplifting, one of my goals is to make people f.. read moreI am really happy that you found my poem positive and uplifting, one of my goals is to make people feel that way with my poetry. Thank you for your kind words.
MH.
poetry is my passion, inspiring people is my goal and drawing a smile on someone's face is my pleasure. I try to plant love, hope, peace and happiness in you and me. Let's be friends, poet friends, or.. more..