Hidden Treasures

This is a poem I wrote when I was eight haha

On a hot island, far away,

Deep under the sparkling sea,

I looked and there I saw a treasure chest. 

I dived into the lovely blue sea

Rusty and dusty,

I opened it up, what would I find?

Gold, pearls, silver, diamonds,

I was excited at the sight of the sparkling treasure,

I grabbed some treasure, 

And ran and ran and ran.

Reviews

[00000000000000000000000..]

Awesome:) I loved it:) Id run too lol !

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha did anyone catch you?This poem is so nice and simple i really like (if you want you can tell me where the chest is I will take care of it lol)

[InsanityIsMe]

Haha thank you, it was something I had to do in school when I was in year three xD

[Vidya Bacchus]

it was truly very nice:)