Falling from your Grace

This is something me and a friend came up with :)

I'm falling from your grace

the sights you put on me

Your sounds

cover me in visions

easing the beats in my life

Your beauty makes me quiver

like snow drops upon a lake

Your smell

fills the air like roses

making it easy to breathe

Your eyes like glossy water

sparkling in the sea

Your voice 

engulfs me like a song

bringing life to my ears

Without you life would have no meaning

you're perfect through and through

so take my hands in yours

my angel of grace.

You make my ocean

You're standing in my wave

Longing for a feel

One you call unreal

And if it takes forever

We will ride the ways to the sun

seeking the sunny rays

to the warmth that begun.

And though

love doesn't last forever

I believe this is our moment

and you are the one.

Author's Note

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJT5dC3DJo4

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A great collaboration to produce a wonderful poem like this one full of love, imagery and flow...I really enjoyed it...Bravo

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you! :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).............

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Thank you Sami my dear friend and buddy:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............

[Torao]

Wow. Very rare to see so many similes that actually provide quality imagery.!

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you haha

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It was a team effort and we gave our will in all Torao :)

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I love it we did good:) Now that's a slamming poem my dear friend:)

[InsanityIsMe]

It is indeed thank you for the offer to work with you :)

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Ohhhh no lol Thank you:) but your very welcome my friend:)