Falling from your Grace

This is something me and a friend came up with :)

I'm falling from your grace

the sights you put on me

Your sounds

cover me in visions

easing the beats in my life

Your beauty makes me quiver

like snow drops upon a lake

Your smell

fills the air like roses

making it easy to breathe

Your eyes like glossy water

sparkling in the sea

Your voice 

engulfs me like a song

bringing life to my ears

Without you life would have no meaning

you're perfect through and through

so take my hands in yours

my angel of grace.

You make my ocean

You're standing in my wave

Longing for a feel

One you call unreal

And if it takes forever

We will ride the ways to the sun

seeking the sunny rays

to the warmth that begun.

And though

love doesn't last forever

I believe this is our moment

and you are the one.

Author's Note

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJT5dC3DJo4

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Very romantic and very poetic, you will go places girl I can sense and feel it. Thanks for sharing

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you :)

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Its hard to believe just how many view we got to writing this poem:) We did awesome and I am proud of what we did:)

[RealistMe]

I really like this poem. It's very moving. I also like the photo of the red rose. :)

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The poem was a team work effort:) Thank you:)

[RealistMe]

You're welcome. :)

[Misty Blue Eyes]

what a profound write. i like the words "im falling from your grace." that can go so many different places with that. bravo

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Thank you:) friend yep:)

[Misty Blue Eyes]

you are welcome

[Lydia Shutter]

Blissfully romantic words and stunning imagery throughout this poem. "we will ride the waves into the sun" what a glorious image that is. Lydi**

[Rose of many colours]

Lovely, I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing. Very touching..God bless

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you :)

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Thanks Moonera dear friend:)

[Rose of many colours]

you are welcome

[Vidya Bacchus]

your poem is very beautiful your lines drip of emotion thank you for sharing

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very welcome

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It was team work Vidya:) and we both thank you for reading:)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a very melodic and telling poem - lovely conveyance of happy emotions - I admire this type of poem - not something I am good at - I travel on the dark side even when I am happy

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you, I do too but mostly with my stories I think. It's easier to make something using writing - even something beautiful - with pain.

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Thank you for your thoughts KLGoode :)

[EloisaWrites]

The form, style and wordings of your poem is remarkable. I especially love this lines;

You make my ocean
You're standing in my wave

Great write! :)

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Thank you it was a team effort and we were glad to share with every one:)

[Kaylee Olson]

Wow.......breathtaking, I really enjoyed the imagery

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you :)

[Kaylee Olson]

Anytime:)....

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Thank you Kaylee my dear friend:) Kaylee is another one I collaborate with:)

[Kaylee Olson]

You're welcome Jonathan:)

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Smilesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss:)