The Storm Within My Heart

The thunder booms 

The wind howls at night 

The rain pours 

And nothing seems alright 

But when you smile 

The sun comes out 

When you laugh 

There's not a cloud about

The sun shines bright 

And drops of rain sit on the leaves 

I smile back 

And everybody sees 

It's a beautiful world 

And I know where it starts 

It begins with you 

You're the storm within my heart.

Reviews

[annabellee]

"It's a beautiful world
And I know where it starts
It begins with you"
Lovely and sweet write. Enjoyed it a lot :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Beautiful:) I mean wow simply beautiful:)

[InsanityIsMe]

Awh thank you!

[0000000000000000000000000000]

It was my pleasure:)

[Aarea]

Awwww, very cute. Very nice and touching. "When you laugh, there's not a cloud about." great line!!! Loved this poem and good work!

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you :)

[I Shred This Cabbage]

this is a very heartfelt, melancholic poem...with some real hopelessness attached to the end...you are very talented indeed :)

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you so much! I've never been sure about my poems haha

[I Shred This Cabbage]

well you are very good :) no need for doubt!

[Draven]

This is really heartfelt and sweet. Love, compassion, such strong emotions that are the foundations of a poet.

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you! :)

[Calissa Knox]

I love the imagery in this poem. I thought the ending was absolutely perfect. Such a beautiful poem!

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you so much :)

[Calissa Knox]

You're very welcome! :)

[Sami Khalil]

"It's a beautiful world

And I know where it starts

It begins with you

You're the storm within my heart."

A very nice poem. I like the ending too...:)..........

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............................

[zainul]

Words play like happy birds.
You crafted such a lovely work!

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you! :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome! :)