Racing Heart

Tonight I'd like to be with you 

In every way you want me to 

I wish to give you everything 

My heart 

My soul 

Anything. 

Give me what I desire 

Give yourself completely

And set my body on fire 

Tell me what I want to hear 

Whisper it softly 

In my ear 

I'll show you how much you mean to me 

And that yours is all I want to be 

I would give my last breath for you 

I'd do anything 

If you just asked me to.

Reviews

[annabellee]

Great write, great rhythm and rhymes and full of emotion.
loved it :)

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Yep your a great writer hailed in a romantic dew:)

[InsanityIsMe]

:D You're just full of compliments :P I'm going to end up big headed ;) lmao, thank you!

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Well just like what I read:) Naw ya wont ! It was my pleasure:)

[Sarah Lynn]

Ahh! I love it !!! I feel like this is every girl at some point in their life with a guy !

[InsanityIsMe]

Thank you :)

[Sarah Lynn]

You're welcome !

[I Shred This Cabbage]

god this is soo sweet...the submissiveness is very seductive...you know what you're doing :)

[InsanityIsMe]

Why thank you :P

[I Shred This Cabbage]

no thank you :)