Rejection

Faithful eyes daring dreadful hate.
Staring through the window pane.
Gouged eyes shedding rain.
Crying laughter being subdued.
I reject the pain, but let the words fall through the cracks in my lips.
Closed teeth, clenched.
Summon the little child.
The one that innocence has refused.
It has traveled past the eyes of the small infant
It has fallen into the dark abyss of fallen hope.
The presence has gone,
Yet the feeling has stayed.
Strayed away from one's sincereness.
It has escaped the fate of the needy.
It has appeared, as the presence, of evil.
Laughing at your pain.
Enjoy, young child.
You have received your rejection.

Reviews

[Stacey]

Dear Serena,
First off I just wanted to say I really like the imagery of this poem. Your words were very well chosen and thought out. It painted a picture in my head of what rejection is like. Very well written. I enjoyed reading. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the good work!

Cheers,

Staceyanna

[Alecz]

Why thank you. :) I'm glad to enjoyed. Please do not hesitate to read my other poems, as well. Feedback would be much appreciated. :)

[Ed Fagan]

These are the type of poems where I feel comfortable. I appreciate each line for thier honest emotion, inner thoughts and feelings.