The Cold Venom

A cold slithering over my bones and make them ache.

Even the slightest pressure make them feel like they will brake.

I just want to go and crawl away somewhere and sleep.

The sickness takes over me and brings me to weep.

Author's Note

Kept it short and sweet. I was also sick

Reviews

[TheElfPrincess]

Short, powerful and sweet. Wonderful. Well penned!

[blob blob]

wow Jenna--(weeping)--this is great...
"A cold slithering over my bones"
i really felt this--a superb poem!!!:)
"The sickness takes over me and brings me to weep."

[An owl on the moon]

What a vivid description of sickness flowing through you... that chill that has a life of its own. You give such deep feeling to your writes.

[karmic]

I feel like this alot of times when i'm under stress, so i can really feel the power of this poem. Really good write.