Broken

 I used to think i was safe talking to you
but i am not anymore
I used to look forward to seeing you
but now i dread it
I used to smile when i thought about you
but now i cry
I used to think that you were perfect
i was wrong
You used to confide in me
but now you avoid me
You walk by me as if i were invisible
i wish i was
They tell me to forget about it
i tried but failed

Reviews

[alexlessah]

i like this

[azlamalo]

so real. i really like it

[OWLCITYFAN]

Nice poem, very well written, good job :)

[Elliot Kyron]

I adore the style of this poem! It makes a bigger impact, and I love it. Just don't forget capitalization. Other than that, well done!

[Allison]

This is a really nice poem, but you should capitalize your I's.