Life is painful

Hardwork results in good life

Whose of life is that? I think I know.
Its owner is quite sad though.
It really is a tale of woe,
I watch him frown. I cry hello.

He gives his of life a shake,
And sobs until the tears make.
The only other sound's the break,
Of distant waves and birds awake.

The of life is sorrows, failure and deep,
But he has promises to keep,
Until then he shall not sleep.
He lies in bed with ducts that weep.

He rises from his bitter bed,
With thoughts of sadness in his head,
He idolises being dead.
Facing the day with never ending dread.

Author's Note

A simple idea about life

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This has the making of a nice piece except the poem is being led by rhymes. Forced rhymes come about when the writer is concentrating on the rhyme rather than the content of the piece.

[Onlyme]

A very emotional heartfelt breaking poem. That really makes you relate to this person emotional state and sadness. I was moved by this piece of writing. Amazing work.

[Innocent Makwarimba Jnr]

I like this poem because it explains my previous life experiences