Secrets Stay Behind

Creatures scuttle about, jump about

The wind is blowing through the trees

The cold gives me nothing but doubt

It is more a gale than a gentle breeze

When will the snows come?

Must the weather prolong my wait?

A violin song is all i can hum

No words to eat upon my plate

There is no rain, no storm

No ice and yet no warm fervor

Icy cold fingers, a heart at war

With the world and love's gardener

The flowers all wilt and the branches bare

The bushes tremble; in my heart a scare

Reviews

[deadlysilence]

great work all your writings are impressive i love the way you choose your words and just write so freely wonderful

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

There is no rain, no storm
No ice and yet no warm fervor
Icy cold fingers, a heart at war
With the world and love's gardener

...........good lines, I like your writings. lovely.

[AndyP]

Sweet work loved it

[mij nosirrom]

Wonderful word-crafting! Your ideas and feelings rose easily from the words. Bravo!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I would rather feel pain than feel nothing at all. The world can jade someone gets to use to the heart break and become immune to it.