Numbness

Sweet temptation

Fragile lust

Deep infatuation

Gentle touch

Touch my hair

Kiss my lips

Make it last

Make me flip

Tell me you love me

Let me know it is real

Open my eyes, make me see

Help me to know, help me to feel

Reviews

[Maan]

Does numbness and being lost falls in the same category. I'm often confused about it. :) Well the poem has something more to tell than just its words, its nice. Decently written.

[deadlysilence]

so true great job

[Commanda Panda]

Definitely something I'm sure many can relate to. If you're not being stimulated to an extemity you're not feeling anything at all.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Too short and lovely to enjoy. Great.

[Farah]

very sweet!

[writtenfor]

what do you want to feel?

[wijdan]

its good
you've put down feeling in it ...
i liked it

[Walk away slow poet]

I feel a ceratin depth when I read this. I can feel the feelings. Intense write is what I got. So nicely expressed.