Still...

I still feel you in my arms,

And i still hope that you're there.

I still long for your time,

And i still yearn to smell your hair.

I still jump when i hear your voice,

And i still swoon when i put on our song.

I still wish to have you close,

Even if it wont last very long.

I still sing of our kiss,

As if our love was brand new.

I'm still in love,

So why aren't you?

Reviews

[Maan]

Can be more constructive one, you can add life to it after expressing feelings you have about it. :) You can add the positive imaginations to it. More like a 'waiting for you' thing. Well what it is, its nice of its kind any ways. I like it.

[WhiteWillow]

Didn't expect that ending! Well done. Sweetly put, simple prose, and very effective. Nice piece

[Walk away slow poet]

Makes one sit and think about the answer to this. So very nicely written.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is not always fair thats for sure.

[Sourav]

Very nice and rhythmic. Nicely done.