The Things I Think

The Things I Think

A Poem by Inner Rain
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Here are the things that make me tick, just a few of the things i think to think.

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No one can start or stop the ticking of the clock,
When everyone moves with his own ticks and his own tocks.

In a world where knowledge washes things into the water,
Then why not have water for brains?

A dreamer's dream is never ending,
That's why you sometimes wake forgetting.

The curse of being a writer,
Is becoming that stormy animal that hunts for dreams .

If i were to choose, to choose the choosiest choice,
I would choose the choosiest words over choosy boys.

What if the world was still flat?
Then the world would still be filled with fantasy.

Here are the things that make me tick,
Just a few of the things i think to think.
A little of this to make it stick,
More of this to make your eyes blink.

© 2011 Inner Rain


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good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Some very philosophical thinking... the mind can be our greatest strength and often our worst enemy.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem as well, it seems our imagination has been over taken by technology and science that has the answers to everything even things they have never ever seen before or studied like black holes. It kills me how they think they know black holes so well without ever seeing one, so brass we have become that now we think we know as much as God in a blink of an eye. Your poem is awesome sorry about the side note but your poem made me think about that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem. I liked how you made use of the word 'choose' in both lines nine and ten, that really seemed to catch my attention. On a side note, if these are the things you truly think of, then I think you have a very interesting and complex state of mind that's possibly filled with all kinds of ideas.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Inner Rain
Inner Rain

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Why I Write?! I love to write poems... Not really planning to make it a profession, i just enjoy it. I write to relieve stress, especially school-related stress and also so i can express my emot.. more..

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