The Way You Love Me

    Its not the way you hold me, the way you make my heart move.
Its not the way the heavens fall like shooting stars.
    Its not the way you come close, the way you whisper to me.
Its not the way the earth seems to stop turning.
    Its not the way you kiss me, the way you make me feel ecstasy.
Its not the way each moment plays over and over again.
    Its the not the way you hold me tight, the way touch my body.
            Its the way you keep me.
                    The way you love me...

Reviews

[reminder]

I like the style and the message. The repetition really emphasizes your point. Well done!