Transparent Paper

Transparent Paper

A Poem by Inner Rain
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A Tanka

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Nothing is worth seeing
Don't believe, your eyes deceive
Can i see you through?
Write on transparent paper
It might make you think deeper 

© 2009 Inner Rain


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You use senses often in your poetry which allows the reader to feel the words. All you need to do is watch for SPAG other than that...wonderful!

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Inner Rain
Inner Rain

City Of The Living



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Why I Write?! I love to write poems... Not really planning to make it a profession, i just enjoy it. I write to relieve stress, especially school-related stress and also so i can express my emot.. more..

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