Worth It

An Keats Sonnet

On this road i walk
I try ever so hard to make you see
If i am i symmetrical, to what you prescribe

Truth is ticking like a clock
Racing against me
Trying to bring me to my feet

Your words describe
Your mind talks
Not of me

Try to circumscribe
What is my meat
And what is really It

Let the tone fall to a down-beat
Look through me; am i really worth it? 

Reviews

[Ophelia]

I like this. It's very beautiful. I don't like that you don't capitalize the I, but maybe that was intenional. I don't know. But anyhoo, beautiful work!

[bluessadmood]

Oh what wonderful thoughts and lovely words you have,i hope i read well and right
This road I walk ,I try so hard ,Cant you see,do I come close to what you describe,is it me
Your words and mind do not talk of me,Please tell what is my meat,does it really fit
Let your tone fall a bit,look through me ,you think I am worth it
I love the many symbols here and lovely thoughts,very clever write,i just loved it
lovely write..