What Do You See?

What Do You See?

A Poem by Inner Rain

Peer into the mirror;
Tell me what you see.
Tell me, tell me; what do you think of me?

Stare into my soul
Listen to the voices in your ear
Tell me, tell me; why you used to be so near…

Peek into my other world
Think of the wonders you'll see
Tell me, tell me; how you used to lean on me…

See the mirrors in my eyes
Try to remember the all my pain
Tell me, tell me; why was it me who had to be slain?

Look into my eyes!
Tell me; what do you see?!
You see the one who put this pin inside of me!

© 2009 Inner Rain


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Oh thats nice ,i see so much bitterness here ,someone betrayed,and it feels so nasty..
Look in my mirror, Tell me what you see,what you think of me
See into my soul,Listen to voices,Tell me why you were near
Peek into my world,Wonders you will see,Tell me you used to lean on me
See the mirrors in my eyes,Remember all my pain,Tell me why was I slain
look in my eyes tell me what you see..
Lovely words ,dreamy write,so calm and quiet ,so much bitterness..I loved them all
lovely write..


Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2009
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Inner Rain
Inner Rain

City Of The Living



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Why I Write?! I love to write poems... Not really planning to make it a profession, i just enjoy it. I write to relieve stress, especially school-related stress and also so i can express my emot.. more..

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