Missing You

I cannot help but sit & stare
At couples everywhere
They sit & hold hands
As they give, each other love bands

I am filled with such jealousy
But yet haunted by curiosity
I feel sad & blue
Knowing I'm missing you

Being away from you,
Just seems so new
I sit & unearth my brain
Stopping myself from becoming insane

To be with you
My blood will pump
To sit beside you
My heart would jump

I think of you every now & then
Accepting this feeling will never end
I am missing you, how about you
I hope you are missing me too

Reviews

[shinybluestars03]

You toke the thoughts right out of my mind.
I'm missin my boyfriend right now and yes its very difficult
to see other couples around me, gets me frustrated.
Thanks for sharing this piece, I completely relate to it.
Keep on writing.

Best wishes.

[Tanya]

You have the idea right. The last words don't always really ryhme. If you read aloud, you'll see that they don't really ryhme so nicely. If you change around the words, than everyhting will be great.
Good Job.