ONE

The One - YOU knew I was... the One - WE are...

One

 

ONE Love... This we have created - ONE.
Living in the moment, looking into the next...
We grow stronger in a faith that most do not
experience.
We keep our hands on this world - we own it.
Looking into the sky, those stars immense oblivious,
we are their keepers.
We are ONE, this Love above and beyond any previous.
Consider the source never forget... Life Partners.
Let the waves wash out - reach for the Mountain Tops...
Creating everything new... the future - we use the past.
My Love is an Eternal Fire... engulfed.
Embrace our fulfillment...
Carry me...
Fill me...
I am your mirror reflection.

 

Copyright ©2008  InnerSpirit aka Writer Of Life

Reviews

[CRISHAM]

This poem beautifully explores the theme of unity and eternal love, portraying a powerful connection between two people who see themselves as one. The repetition of "ONE" and "Love" emphasizes the strength of their bond, and the imagery of nature—such as stars, waves, and mountains—enhances the poem's grandeur and timelessness. The line "We are their keepers" gives the lovers a celestial quality, suggesting they hold the universe in their hands. The metaphor of love as an "Eternal Fire" captures the passion and intensity of their relationship, while the closing lines—“I am your mirror reflection”—highlight the depth of their shared identity. Overall, it’s a poetic celebration of a profound partnership.

[InnerSpirit]

THIS was my first ever real love-love poem! I didn't understand the importance of (at times) using less words to express my meaning was truly better than vomiting it out there.

[Ladysue]

This is stunning...so soft and so beautiful...truly wonderful thoughts...very moving...a treasure to read...

[Ruth]

Beautifully written.....so amazingly so, I am deeply moved! Love is taken to such a new level here! xx

[Angela]

This is utterly beautiful. Love the idea of being the keeper of the stars. "Creating everything new...the future- we use the past." There is a deep abiding truth to this and it gives me hope. Well done!

[J. Marc]

Overwhelming for it is simply powerful. "We grow stronger in a faith that most do not
experience." Who would not be curious to know that!? Who could resist that!?

[Seshat Nidaba]

I think it's good that you have been reincarnated on here, I'd love to see what you write like now. I enjoyed this read.

[quinfinn]

the last three lines blow me away! as Yoda would say... a gift you have...

[quinfinn]

i love it! you HAVE done this before.....