Rap #1

Rap #1

A Poem by Careless Whispers ._.
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a rap me and my brother made on the way back from San Francisco

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[Rap]: I have no idea what I’m doing.

Paparazzi stalking, interviewing

Me

I like to see

Cows going pee

 

[Talking]: Alright, lets start the beat now…

 

[Rap]: One, two, three, four, five, six, this uh

Rhymes about to hit you right in the kisser

No surprises, but I guess your rhymes just a

Jumbled up words caught in a blizzard

White, white, all you see is white

White like my daddy

White like a burger without the patty

I want some donuts…

STOP!!!

Hammer time

Just a criminal without the crime

A clock without a time

Corona without the lime

Ribs without the prime

Hand me the remote, turn on the T.V.,

Prime time

That was a horrible rhyme, but now your all mine

So sit down, take some time

To enjoy these sweet raps of mine  

© 2012 Careless Whispers ._.


Author's Note

Careless Whispers  ._.
i never said it was the best....

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Lol spoon. I LUV DAT RAP!!! WE SHUD DO THAT 4 THE TALENT SHOW!!! jkjkjk lmfao i luv it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TOTALLY

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

haha tru dat

Posted 12 Years Ago


haha awesome reminds me of the rap you showed me on the way to sly park. never sitting across from coraima and jana on a bus again. actually any vehicle

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2012
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