I Do

I've grown so small
And my life is dull
I'm seventeen
But God, I feel old
These wrinkles I feel
But no one can see
I'm crippled as well
And my hands are weak
I've seen everything
I've felt every feeling
I've walked on walls
And slept on the ceiling
I'm numb to the world
Who cares what they think?
Yeah right, that works
I care secretly
I do
And it's only been
Two weeks and a day
You won't hold my hand
But I choose to stay
Why? I'm not sure
I'm going on hope
I just want to be
In love and alone
Don't get me wrong
I want what I have
I'm just feeling off
And terribly sad
I've lost my best friend
I've lost all my light
In fact you are who
I think about and smile
I do

12/5/07

Reviews

[Akaila]

AW this was beyond cute!! the flow was amazing! no joke it sounds cliche but the flow girl the flow!! that flow was sick!!(which means good) okay!! anyways there is nothing wrong with this poem right here!! AMAZING JOB!
~akaila~