Intimidation

Now you, little lady
Your voice
Your face
Your smile
Your gaze
Why is it that
I can't say
How I feel
I admit it
I confess
It's a little hard
To talk to you

11/30/07

Reviews

[Akaila]

hey!! um.. okay the topic is good!! people you are attracted sometimes its hard to talk to them! but try to get into a little bit more depth with it!! maybe expand your thoughts about why it is so hard to talk to this woman!!!!!
~akaila~
its a great start but it could be even better!