Alice

She fell into a pit
Of despair and loneliness
Dropping just like Alice
Down the hungering abyss

But she should not feel fear
For what she does not know
Is that I wait here at the bottom
To catch her from below

Reviews

[Norah]

I love it! especially the ending, a really great poem overall

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Fitting rhyme scheme for the imgery. Nicely done

[Inkh(e)art]

Thanks you!

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

If you like Alice in Wonderland enough to read a fan fiction I wrote a piece called Bounty Hunting In Wonderland. Could you review it for me please? Let me know where it could use some grease?

[Inkh(e)art]

I like stories but to be honest I'm not a big reader on fan fics. I usually prefer originals. I'm also not the best at reviewing. I can say if I like or dislike something but I'm not terribly great at pointing out specifics. Glad to hear you enjoy Alice and Wonderland enough to right about it too :)

[emipoemi]

Would we all had someone waiting at the bottom to catch us when we fall.....Well done!

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you!