The eyes are the window to the soul

emotions within our eyes

The Eyes are the window to the soul

 

Angry steely blue eyes

That have a stare  as cold as ice

Plunging your mood into the depths of despair

These eyes will get you nowhere

 

Wide winter blue sparkly eyes with navy rims

Full of fondness love and affection

Unconditional love for the mother’s child

These eyes will get you through life

 

Blue eyes flashing like sapphires

Full of burning desire

Blue dancing flames wildly leaping in the fire

These eyes may get you in trouble

 

The anxious scared jittery dull blue eyes

Hiding the somersaults inside masking the abuse the hurt

That’s trying to escape that needs to subside

These eyes will bring unrest for sure if you don’t open the door

 

The laughing electric blue eyes

Hypnotising tantalising like a tempting pool of water

Mesmerizing all who look into them

These eyes will get you far in life

 

The thoughtful dreamy honest blue eyes

Images of your colourful life

Putting all that’s dark inside to rest

Photographs of happy times imprinted in our minds

These eyes will bring you tears and joy and inner peace

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Please help with grammar I have left out punctuation.

Reviews

[Monica]

This is a great write! I like that you left out the punctuation (I found one comma in the last line), it adds to the flow and feel of your words.
I love the way you describe each vision.
The eyes are truly the window to our souls...and you captured it beautifully.
Well done, keep writing :)

[A. Amos]

Interesting and capivating read, truly enjoyed thanks for sharing

[R J Askew]

Lovely read. I esp like the way verse 5 is bigger and seemingly more ragged physically than the others reflecting what it is actually saying. I also like the last verse very much in the way it ends on a calm, philosophical note.

[Ink Angel]

Yes I see what you mean verse 5 stands out, its got a kind of flirtiness about it lol, had not realised, thanks Ron :)

[Adam Whitworth]

Hello Ink Angel, I'm just having a good look around writerscafe. Your writing style is quite different from mine but I've seen a few of em, keep up the good work, this one is my favourite so far.

[Ink Angel]

Thank you Adam I much appreciate your comments :) loo forward to reading some of your work.

[MandaBear]

It was good :) I liked it a lot. I wonder what brown eyes would say in the window lol

[Ink Angel]

Thanks for your lovely review Amanda :) good point have you got brown eyes maybe you could write one

[Mary]

this is beautiful! eliminate all of the punctuation, it just gets in the way of this poem. Your choice of words have determined where the pauses should be. So many ways to describe blue- and truly, the eyes ARE the window to the soul.

[Sami Khalil]

These eyes will get you through life.
Very romantic.

[Ink Angel]

Thank you for your review, sorry for delay not been on here fore some time

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome .

[EileenMarie]

Very good........ didn't know what to expect when I first started reading this and you described my ex in the first paragraph! I'm glad it was about good and evil :) Great poem.....

[Ink Angel]

Thank you for your lovely review on this,I love to reflect moods.

[Kes]

This is a wonderful poem. :)
Keep up the hard work!
K

[Gl30]

That was very beautiful! It has a lot of emotion and description to it. It fully emphasized the saying 'eyes are the window to the soul.' Loved it!