The Bubble

this one is about the weather, again! another wet day here.

The Bubble

 

Sitting here in my grey bubble,

Hovering in time.

Cold inside and out,

capsulated by emptiness.

 

Waiting for the sun to come.

Watching for a glint of fun.

Fill my heart with the essence of sun light

Reflecting all the colours of the earth

A rainbow arch of coloured light

Envelops my soul

 

Lifting me up on high

As I spread my peacock feathers;

For the passersby,

 Performing now

The sun is in the sky

 

The sun..... It’s like a magic spell,

Hocus Pocus

When the sun breaks through

I start to dance an Irish Jig

 Seeing the world now, through another lens

Prism lights that reflect back the beauty

Of it all, now I’m having a ball.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Susanna F]

This really illustrates how the sky and light affect us inside and out. Weather and seasons aren't just outside events, but can be inner ones also, with our unseen connection to our world. Your imagery is beautiful, shifting as the colors on a bubble in the sun. It also shows how completely a gray mood can change with new environment or thoughts, reminding me to hold strong in my worst moments. Inspiring!

[Whiskurz]

I really liked your word choices......Whisk

[Kes]

This is a great poem!
Really enjoyed it. :)
K

[CourtneyShay]

this is different but happy i liked it

[Monica]

Good job, you created such beautiful imagery! It's well written and happy :)

[Passion]

I like the enthusiasm and excitement of this. How the sun in our hearts makes the world a brighter place. Very well written.

[Sarah Nicole Nadler]

I really liked this, the colors and the visions it evokes are fun and bright. Well written!

[$êlvån]

Nice picked up and gr8 work.:)

[R J Askew]

We all need a bit of sunlight from time to time. A patch of blue sky has just shown up right now. I like prisms and rainbows and the whole idea of the colours buried in light and in us, too.

[reflectingus]

What a happy poem! It makes me want to join and perhaps the best time to bust my crazy mooves. Haha, I like the sunshine here, the optimism just flows through those words which are very rhythmic and enjoyable to read. Often I'd be stuck indoors due to bad weather and I'd just sigh, and it does, indeed feel like a bubble, but to go outside, get tanned by the sun, it just puts me in a happier mood. And guess I can relate to the feeling right now, because it's getting quite rainy outside over here. Thanks for sharing :)