Angel on my shoulder

we only have to ask, angels dont have free will.

Angel  on My Shoulder

 

Angel on my shoulder

Step into me,

Fill my eyes with a healing glint,

To help this person in front of me.

 

Angel on my shoulder

Giving me the strength,

To carry on through the dark days

Filling me with pure white shimmering light, and hope.

 

Angel on my shoulder

Comforting me in times of lose.

I only have to ask

I feel your precious wings

Envelop my very being.

 

Angel on my shoulder

I wish more people would ask

If only they could see

And look behind and

Glance at thee

How different their lives could be.......

 

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I agree with the rest, this is certainly not cheesy, and the font color makes so much sense and accentuates the soothing effect. I enjoyed this almost prayer-like beauty of this poem, very comforting and uplifting. There's this sense of belief, that angels well always be there, their presence can make life something else, and make every moment beautiful. Good job.

[KT-B]

I love this, an angel believer and a reader of many angel books I'm sure the angels love to be recognised in writing so well done X

[Ink Angel]

Thank you, for your lovely review, they are closer than ever in these times of struggle. x

[Kes]

I like this. I think the last stanza is really effective. :)
I really like your poetry.
Thanks for sharing!
K

[Mary]

Such a heartfelt prayer/poem! I love the "fill my eyes with a healing glint" expression. I can imagine the healing energy! write lots!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Like a beautifully written prayer of a piece. Very comforting, I certainly wish people would at least believe in angels, they can help guide us in so many ways.

[Suditi]

Wow!
Your writing amazes me!
Its so beautiful..so serene..
Great job.

[Sarah Nicole Nadler]

that is so beautiful! A good lesson to learn, always to look behind and glance at thee...

[just is]

Wow, this write is really amazing! I enjoyed this

[Monica]

Definitely not cheesy!! You wrote a beautiful poem that's comforting :)
I like the font color, it's soft, soothing.
I love the first stanza!

[Wendy Seames Garner]

A sweet poem...as to the font color, lavender is my favorite color. I've made use of that little angel many times in the past.