so much emotion in these simple words. I love how there are many voices in this poem. The messenger, trying his best to bring such sad news with dignity, the witness to the funeral procession, the mother (I think), and the son she lost. The simplicity of the poem is perfect- it allows the grief to be experienced. Beautiful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Mary for your kind comments. After not writing for ages I wasnt at all sure about this on.. read moreThank you Mary for your kind comments. After not writing for ages I wasnt at all sure about this one !
Any parents worst nightmare. See many of these around Milton Keynes, flowers, toys, football shirts, a sad, sad sight. Unique, have never read a poem on this topic, and very well written
From her Son who watches over her
He will see her mend in time
Yet never quite the same again
She will never give up the shrine
Deep and profound piece of art, above lines were amazing. Great work my friend...
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
We see so many of these curbside shrines. I like to look at different peoples feelings and how they.. read moreWe see so many of these curbside shrines. I like to look at different peoples feelings and how they may have been effected by death ........ thanks again.
Wow, a sad poem but it was a great poem. I think this is how a mother would feel if she had lost her son or daughter. Great job really felt the emotion!
so much emotion in these simple words. I love how there are many voices in this poem. The messenger, trying his best to bring such sad news with dignity, the witness to the funeral procession, the mother (I think), and the son she lost. The simplicity of the poem is perfect- it allows the grief to be experienced. Beautiful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Mary for your kind comments. After not writing for ages I wasnt at all sure about this on.. read moreThank you Mary for your kind comments. After not writing for ages I wasnt at all sure about this one !
Ink angel, your punctuation is perfect for this poem. Sigh, I hope, you're not writing from personal experience, about the lost of your son. For the second stanza really hit me, the hardest, with the single fallen rose. Having past so many roadside memorials, here in Canada, with the small teddy bears or bouquets of flowers, piled together. Please pardon me, as I wipe a tear or two away, from my eyes. Thank you, for sharing this poem, with us.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind review. No, its not from a personal experience, for which I am very.. read moreThank you so much for your kind review. No, its not from a personal experience, for which I am very thankful. I feel it was channeled to me, as I sometimes do with certain poems.......
We see so many roadside shrines, I guess its something we all have in common no matter where we live.. read moreWe see so many roadside shrines, I guess its something we all have in common no matter where we live. Sorry if I made you cry :(
I love to write poetry, love to read poetry, love of graffiti, Art, Angels and photography. I have recently had my poem break of Day pubished and another about the Green man will be published soon :).. more..