The old and the beautiful

 

 

The old and beautiful
My heart is scolded and cold
Beauty never showed and now i'm old
Did i play it right...each role?
Despite the fouls that let me down
Have i accomplished goals.
I keep asking myself..confused now
Searching for love to put me out
To take away the misery
That got me in mystery
Thinking i was history
Because someone took my heart and this is a story
About a beautiful girl only loved by her appearance
She hated herself personally
Because her beauty was the interference
She kept getting used,but she tried to think she was useful?
A heart full of pain Just beating alone
She could only felt a sword in a stone
Sharp material cutting edge, bleeding words
All it is love, She wanted to take course
She kept cutting herself in pity like nothing else is worse
She drowned herself, strangle herself
She was fed up with her life
The things she got caught up with tangle herself
She said even though people see I'm beautiful
All the things i been through made me ugly now
And even if i try to rejuvenate I'm too old now
The old and beautiful

Reviews

[Fanciful Goddess]

Very nice.i Iike this poem.words where very well used. (^_~)

[deeps]

Yes this is kinda typical
Well expressed. Like the emotion involved

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Wow... deep. Its wonderful! Its a typical story of a lonely girl seeking attention for other things than her looks! I've felt that way before. Its amazing when your work can make a person relate to it. I loved it. Fantastic!!!