Don't Go

Someone I love very much is moving far away...

My fingers stiffen as I try to pull them away,
My heart races against the ending day.
Can we just stay her a minute?
Please don't pull the trigger and release the bullet.

I haven't said what I need to say.
I'm not finished here.
So please...just stay.


Don't go, the words tear from me,
My voice breaks and hot tears blind me so I can't see.
When you go you'll take the best of me,
When you go...there will be nothing left of me.

I don't know how to watch you disappear,
You walking away has been my biggest fear.
How am I supposed to live without you?
For all this time you've been all I've had.
Just us, just two.

So you pull away and break my fingers,
Limp they lay bleeding with piercing splinters.
You leave me crumpled on the floor,
On bleeding knees staring at the closing door

And all I can say through aching sobs is this...
Please don't forget me, that somewhere I exist.

Reviews

[Ammar Ali]

Ending is perfect thumbs up

[wordman]

a heart wrenching and sad write ! hope it`s not true

[Jessi]

It is. My baby sister...my besr friend...is leaving. She is moving quite a distance away and is slowly shutting me out. We had a rough childhood...but we sisters clung to each other. It is hard losing my best friend.

[wordman]

yeah,i have lost two sisters and two brothers ,it is hard..sorry to hear it,maybe you can talk every day

[several thousand]

It's the baby's prerogative to break away isn't it... I think her 'shutting you out' is probably a survival instinct to help her do what she feels she has to do. Don't worry, sisters are forever - I trust she wont forget you.

[wordman]

well as the baby of my family ,i would say so,i left at 19

[Boca Best Cleaners]

This is really good, very heartfelt reading you words evoke memories and emotions. Thank you for sharing.

[Jessi]

You are so nice. Thank you. It was born from something I am going through.

[Boca Best Cleaners]

I am sorry to hear that your going through something hard to deal with. Being able to express your feelings in such a beautiful way can help you as well as others and I have found helping others always helps my coping ability. I want to encourage you to keep writing and sharing your gift. :)

[hdc]

Nicely written, but kinda sad:( quick tell me a joke and make me glad :) Just kidding, Its a beautiful piece, And easy to read. Well done.

[Jessi]

Thanks. I could use a joke ;)

[Ashley Renegade]

Heart breaking and beautiful!

[Jessi]

Thanks! I appreciate your reviews!