Nicely penned. Author's Note makes this piece even more touching and inspiring - be a donor. I'm obscenely healthy for 61, no heart issues, blood pressure, etc. No arthritis or gout, I do, however, have a mouth to rival any fleet that wants to sail into the harbor. See Creative Cussin' and you'll understand.
Again, beautifully done, and depending on what you believe about the afterlife, he may have already read this...
Powerful and wonderful words for your friend. We must remember the people, we befriended and need to be remember. Cystic fibrosis take so many. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts for a good friend.
Coyote
I'm not an emotional person at all but your poem really tugs at my heartstrings! This is the best tribute to someone passed over that I've ever read. You touch on so many important details that bring your friend alive for the reader. This poem is the very definition of LIFE, whereas it's about accepting death. The rhyme & rhythm gives your message an upbeat feeling, despite how your words express the very depths of missing someone & regretting this death. I love this becuz it's stated in simple terms, it's approachable. Sometimes we humans speak in elevated language regarding death & it loses it's warmth & comfort, which your poem delivers in spades (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
I really like how you communicate of how you loved him like a friend and not a lover. I have never lost any of my friends yet so I can only imagine. You are a great writer, keep writing.
I agree there. Not the end...as with every memory of your dear friend. Good luck in promoting awareness of this debilitating illness. Sincere, warm words make up this composition.
Nicely penned. Author's Note makes this piece even more touching and inspiring - be a donor. I'm obscenely healthy for 61, no heart issues, blood pressure, etc. No arthritis or gout, I do, however, have a mouth to rival any fleet that wants to sail into the harbor. See Creative Cussin' and you'll understand.
Again, beautifully done, and depending on what you believe about the afterlife, he may have already read this...
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