Chapter 6

The beginning of the adventure

Alice yawned as a wave of excitement flowed through her. The surrounding landscape was beautiful. Lush trees, a chilly wind, and massive mountains. "Whoa." 
Everyone nodded their heads at the preteen's statement. "So uh, where do we go from here?" The Tank asked. 
"Easy," Ash put on her gloves and clapped her hands, a digital map appeared between them. "We just follow this map. I suppose we should head into the closest town first."

Anakin stood silent as he was walking. Alice hopped behind Ash who was discussing her marriage matters. "In the future you're definitely going too be my made of honor, the godmother of all my babies... Oh and the aunt also, of course. Oh I can't wait for the moment Sebastian drops too his knees and propose! Oh I am dazed by the paradise!" Ash said. Sebastian over heard a bit and slowly walk behind too catch up with Anakin.

      "Man, I don't know if I can keep up with this." Sebastian said. Anakin, stuck in his own daydream nodded his head in agreement. "Yeah, promise I'll be the best man." he said somehow converting Ash's conversation into his dummy words. 

   "Aw not you too." Sebastian said. Anakin then woke up, jerking his head around. "Sh." he said.

      "I mean can we at least talk normal stuff-"

    "Sh!" Anakin shushed Sebastian. Sebastian became a bit annoyed. "Annie don't be like that-"

    "For Pete's sake Sebastian shut up!" Anakin said before shooting senbon out like lightning. "Oh my Kami! I'm going too be murdered!" a voice screamed from the brush. "What the hell!" Ash cried out. Anakin shrug, thinking he doing what he should be doing.

   Alice began laughing. "Hey! Are you guy going too kill me or what?" the voice once again called out. 

     Sebastian ran out around too find a guy no bigger then himself all pinned to a tree. He look a bit disheveled, unstable. His dark green hazel eyes, slightly covered by brown hair, stared  back with a bit of fear. Then he quivered a smile. "I don't deserve to die." he whined. 

"Ano," Sebastian asked cocking his head to the side, "Who are you?"

"Me?" the boy said. He tried too laugh. "Liam... Please don't kill me." he flinched.

"Why would I kill you? I won't kill you unless your a boss. Killing other things is their job." He jerked his head to the rest of his friends.
"Sebastian love, who is that?" Ash came over to see what was going on.

 "Just some kid whose definitely doesn't handle a confrontation well." Sebastian replied.

"It doesn't matter who he is. What matters is what we do with him." Anakin wisely said. He went close to Liam's face. "Why shouldn't we kill you?"
The kid was desperately trying to find a reason. "Wait, wait! I'm the son of an innkeeper. If you let me go, and protect me the rest of the way there, I'll convince my dad to let you guys stay the night for free."

 "Actually, that's not a bad thought." Anakin said, a bit surprise at the boy's surrender. Alice popped up out of no where. "And free food?" she ask with narrowed eyes.

    Liam couldn't help but faltered at the sight of Alice. Anakin quickly realized and stood protectively in front of her. "She's twelve and I'm her brother." he warned.

     Liam gulp, he didn't need anymore trouble. Too bad the chick is about five years younger. He thought. Anakin still glared until Liam finally stumbled up and pointed at a direction. "I-it's that way, and we will provide food. I-if that what you want."

    "Yay food!" Alice cried out. Ash took hold of Sebastian arm, "Escort me there my love?" Ash ask blinking her lashes. Until Sebastian grew flustered and jerk his arm away, but Ash's grasp held.

     "Let best be going before night hits." Anakin said, feeling his senbon in place.

      They arrived too a small but decent inn. Liam asked them to wait while he talked to his father. "Father! I have come home! I brought some people..." he exclaim before growing quiet into a conversation with his father.

      "What! You promise them FREE nights and food!? What kind of son I mine gives out FREE HELPINGS!" Ash as well as everyone else flinch at the sound of the unhappy man.

     But as the office door opened, a chubby clean man has walk out with open arms and a big smile. "Friends, how kind of you too have escort my son home. Please, I'll give you room 104." he said, with true kindness.

     The group became confuse of this bipolar man. Anakin study his features and quietly made notes too himself.

      The man introduces himself as Liam's father Mr. Knight, the owner of the inn of course.

     "Have a pleasant stay, dinner will be serve around six PM room service is acceptable." Mr. Knight excuse himself from the room. The first thing Alice could think of is jumping unto the nearest fresh bed. "My paradise!" she sight into the covers. Ash soon fallow, landing right next too Alice hugging a pillow pretending it too be Sebastian's abs. "My love." she sigh with pink cheeks and affectionate eyes.

     Alice then giggle at Ash, realizing how tired they where compare to Anakin and Sebastian.

     Anakin walk over too the sliding doors. "Two beds. The girls can sleep on that bed and I'll sleep on the other." Anakin declared too Sebastian.

     Sebastian jumped. "No uh, I'm having the bed." he argued. Anakin side glance, keeping his hand in his pocket, keeping his cool. "Well, we'll then. Unless you want too sleep with me, I think we can arrange that." Anakin joked. Sebastian pointed his fingers in rage. "What type of sicko are you! I'm getting the bed! No exception!" Sebastian said. Anakin sigh, shrugging as he walk over to the spare bed and landed on his back. 

    It took Sebastian a few second too realize that Anakin has walk across the room and landed unto the bed right in front of him."

     He groaned at his slow reflexes.

Sebastian sighed. 'So I have three choices, 

1. Sleep with Annie. 

2. Ask Alice to sleep with Annie, and sleep with Ash. 

3. Sleep.on the cold hard floor.' 

It wasn't a hard decision. "Floor it is." Laying down in between the beds he took off his ring and fell asleep then and there.

 Anakin was still mind awake, he smile as Sebastian fell asleep on the hard floor. Ash in the midst of sleep, manage too put a cover over Sebastian and fell asleep. Alice was out first, Anakin felt relieved that they have a place too stay. But he still felt uncomfortable. They way Ash tossed often in her bed, Anakin knows that she felt it too. Slipping his ring off he slumbered as well.

Author's Note

R/R Plz!

Reviews

[AWickedMoon]

"Anakin stood silent the whole way they were* walking” This sentence doesn’t make sense you could try "Anakin walked silently the whole way or during the walk there Anakin stayed silent"

Hey are you guy going to kill me or what?" the voice once again called out.
I think you meant are you guys* Also he didn’t really ask before if they were going to kill him he merely stated it. Perhaps you want something along the lines of “Hey! The voice called out from the bush again. Are you going to kill me?” it asked.

Liam gulp, he didn't need any more trouble
Gulp should be gulped*

Until Sebastian grew flustered and jerk his arm away, but Ash's grasp hold.
Hold should be held*

"Let best be going before time shorten." Anakin said, feeling his senbon in place.
I think what you meant is “Be best get going before time shortens” or you could be more specific in why there is not a lot of time. For example "We best be off before nightfall"

I’m just wondering if this is a whole chapter and if its filler? Maybe in this chapter you could elaborate more. The other chapters leave me wanting to read more but this chapter makes me lose a bit of interest. I did like the Liam character though.

Just some suggestions I do like your work though! Hope you don’t think I’m being pushy. Look forward to reading more about it

[InkAngelXIII]

No, your not being pushy at all. I need some one to point out my flaws and tell me what I can do to be better. I really appreciate it!
Yeah it was mostly filler for next chapter. It's kinda hard to make sure everything is okay when there is two people writing it lol.