The One Who Chases The Star

The One Who Chases The Star

A Poem by F.Z
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A symbolic poem involving the star in which it connected to hopes , dreams and Ideals. Chase the star and never given up on your dream.

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Beyond the star , I fathom...
Faraway it was , I sadden...
And now I lament...
Star , oh star...
Where are you?
Don't you gone I beg you...
For my dream are precious...
For my Ideal , I treasure...

So hear me star ,
And return my ambition...
For all hope not yet lost ...
For all determination not yet gone...
For all dream not yet astray...

So My faraway friends ,
give me a bright star...
An eternal , Shining star...
So that my dream can finally become true...
So that my Ideal are finally realise...
So that my hope are finally secure...

© 2014 F.Z


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Longing...we all have it don't we ?
This is very nice...you expressed it well !
Enjoyed this.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

F.Z

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :) glad to hear somebody enjoyed :D
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)

Scott......
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Bri
Beautiful, just watch out for spelling errors, at times, it may take the attention away from the beautiful message that you wish to express.
Great write
-Bri.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

F.Z

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and advise. I will take note of that when writing my next work of art :)
This was unique and lovely in a sad way...Thank you for sharing...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 7, 2014
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Tags: Star, Poem, Hope, Dream, Ideal, Not given up.

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F.Z
F.Z

Brunei



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