My Place

My Place

A Poem by PerfectFlaw90
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About that place that I like to hide every once in awhile.

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I hide in my own place
Hidden behind my face
To escape to my own world
To where my dreams unfurl
To where my fantasies
Overcome reality
That place where I am God
Where no one thinks me odd
The place where all is mine
And all my thoughts divine
Where I am not alone
Not just another drone
I hide inside my shell
To escape from this hell
This place where I live
My childhood I relive
In here where I’m content
To escape from torment
This place is so perfect
This place I must protect
This is how it makes me feel
To bad this place isn’t real.
 

© 2008 PerfectFlaw90


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this speaks true of everytime we want to run and hide from the cruel world. And the saddest reality is packed in the last lines! This is dark and emotional, but in it's idealistic essence, it is the depiction of how the people in reality does. Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe. This is very sad. Good rhyming but just sad. I hope you can find that place..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 18, 2008

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PerfectFlaw90
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