Peace From Heaven

I was sitting in my room listening to the rain and my friend suggested I wrote a poem about it. So here it is.

Peace from heaven
Soothing repetition
The droplets of water
Life’s intermission
Many fall
But become one sound
And against the windows
Their call resounds
Soothing harmony
Brings a calm
Unwinding mind
Like David’s Psalm
A liquid wave
Bringing sleep
And into my mind
It slips in deep
Washing away
Cares and worries
They are all gone
In a wind-swept flurry
And as they fall
Into the night
I know somehow
Everything is alright
 

Reviews

[Winter McPherson]

This is really lovely. Captures the serenity that rainfall gives. The rythm and words all flow together very nicely. I liked where you compared it to "David's psalm". Good job.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

Flows like a river...
Great rhyme and such tranquility in this one...
You rock

Lynda

[daftinklings]

The last line seems kind of awkward. Like too many syllables. But I like the idea though. How about..."All is right"?