Peaceful Confusion

Assurance that thoughts can be completely and utterly confusing. While taking their own course to find what they need to survive.

Those whispers in my ear such an interrupting nightmare,

the beauty of silence peaceful tranquility.

Life hmm... interesting how it pulls us, but towards what?

 Tempting almost teasing me these words work their way onto the page.

 Forming what? A masterpiece uniquely beautiful

but the meaning unseen, unheard no understanding on why it was written.

 To release some of this confusion literally maybe a sign of relief.

Wishfully thinking however on that someone will read this and

understand the complexity of this lonely soul.

By:

Infusion

Author's Note

Write what you think!

Reviews

[Linzey]

It's a cool thought that you're trying to explain or at least what i believe you're trying to state. We all write for our own reasons and even though some might not understand our underlying cause for writing it we should be thankful that it's out and that someone else might be able to see it.

[InnerSpirit]

I still freaking love this poem... I don't know what was flowing through your brain, oh wait, I may know. Never mind. I just freaking love it. It is powerful and attention getting, deep and intriguing.

Thank you for being you!

InnerSpirit

[TL Boehm]

Life hmm... interesting how it pulls us, but towards what?
a question for the ages.
This is a well done poem - it made me think.

[Bailey C. Writing]

This poem was beautiful...being lonely can be a complex feeling, and some people scream to be heard through their writing...this poem could have many different meanings to many different people. You did excellently

[Kristine Ferg]

Our words are driven by motive and through which we want to be heard. It's almost dark. A wonderful write indeed.

[Victor]

Really good poem it made me think really hard, I had to think deeply with every sentence you wrote! I hope to keep reading stuff by you that is similar to this bro!

Victor

[Solst Rapture]

The spaces between us are wise, the time before us is present and the future we dream of is already ours - but we alone cannot see beyond the horizon. Together we can see beyond two horizons, three horizons - all horizons. But we can only experience togetherness independently, thus we must trust, we must have faith, or we have no hope.

[Brytt]

deep, Infusion! And spot on for at least 90% of the world. This is totally legit, very powerful, and stays with the reader. Great job!

[InspiredHope]

Our thoughts and emotions run towards different planes. How many roadblocks must we encounter before that final decision is to-be made...? If our thoughts are not our own; whose are they, we need only ask...

I love the opening 'thought' - beautiful crafted, my friend.

When will life allow us that 'red light' to pause and ponder -on where we must go; where we are needed?

Thoughts intermingled during the course of this write - how our mind races to reach that final lap...

In most occurrences, it does take another to look into our own soul to envision the beauty within us all while unlocking our true potential.

Thank-you for gifting us all with the opportunity to know the intellectual and compassionate soul that you have become. Always be yourself...

Hope

[trainwreck]

You did a good job with this poem. it was very simple and enjoyable. Good write here.

[Tasha]

Amazing piece
♥ Ta'Shandra