ENTROPY OF MY MIND

Hey guys, I wrote the below piece of poetry when I was confused and depressed due to some personal problems.

I am lost inside the winds of this ratrace.
I want break.
I want break.

Sometimes, I think I am still lost in this ratrace.
I want break.
I want break.

Writing, Programming, Sketching all I love but then I think I love science too.

I am an introvert,
this life is very difficult.

Want to rule,
but hate to rule.

Love, hatred, goals and friendships all will end one day,
Except a guilt that made you end them that day.

I wish, I could do all I want to do someday,
but the failure of success holds me back everyday.

-Infinitygrl

Author's Note

I hope you liked it.
Don't forget to review it :)
Thanks!

Reviews

[Chris]

Entropy - an interesting word choice. It denotes the unused portions of whom we are.

Detailing an existence while being PART of it can be daunting ...hence rat race is a fair depiction. Little control, causality perceptions, waiting in endless and vacant-eyed lines. Eating is not an easy habit... but IS a necessary one. It isn't hard (most times) doing what we like, but making a living while we DO - that is the rub.

[Riya]

Thank you sir for your kind review and you are true "making a living while we do what we love is not easy". But, when we do what we love then we are self satisfied with our lives and everything seems clear.

[msharma]

An honest writing.As it is said" every cloud has a silver lining"' the only thing in this world is to stand and uphold rightly your actions. Beautiful penning.

[Riya]

Thank you ma'am :)

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Wow that is amazing and descriptive! Just have faith in yourself, never give up and everything's gonna be alright someday 🤟

[Riya]

Thanks for your review :)