Train Ride

It’s practically masochistic

To sit here and think of you,

Of your face above mine,

As the sun rises.

And as the wheels turning beneath me

Bear me ever farther away from you,

From your blue eyes, your laugh, your touch,

I can only think about those things

That I will be missing most,

Those things that will draw me back to you.

Reviews

[Halkhend]

i love it it is full of emotion

[cest la vie]

For a small poem, you sure packed it full of good things..
Simple, concise and full of emotion..

Thse things that draw us away seem to be the same things which bring us back.. wonder why that often is?

Very nice poem...